Nice work buddy. Your production is coming along, the only constructive criticism I can offer is maybe bring up the low end a bit more. (I realize its only a rough draft) Your mid/high sounds great but the lows are a little weak. If you have the BBC sonic maximizer or Waves RBass, those can both really beef up your bass. Or even just route those instruments to a sub bus and EQ and compress. Keep up the good work!